I really like your melody, especially the glass sound.
you mean the celesta?
Neat song. However I would do things such as make the intro more complex as well as some of the other emptier parts. I like the chorus at 0:42, but I noticed another issue. I think the song would sound less choppy if you eased back on the compression (turning the input and ratio down and the threshold up). Finally, I would suggest working a bit on your sound design, especially the lead that goes through the chorus. I would try making it sound more stereophonic.
Hope this advice helps you in the future!
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