First off, sorry for what probably won't be an extremely helpful review. I don't make audio and really don't know the inter workings of it.
This has a really upbeat manner to it. One could paint a picture or scene of a very happy somewhat frantic situation. I didn't really like the parts like 1:40 and 2:40ish. They were an alright transition, but for some reason sounded really out of place to me. Perhaps they lasted a bit long? I can't quite put my finger on it, but they were distracting. I also think that they were too numerous.
The part that started around 3:10 was really awesome. I thought the ending was kind of abrupt. Overall the whole song was really catchy and had a good vibe to it. I thought it was a bit on the long side and could have been cut done by about a minute or so.
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Being real honest here - sure you got some more potential to pull out, I can hear that you aren't as experienced as some musicians making actual money with their songs but this track shows off where you wanna go and it shows it off pretty well. This is a tune I'd upload to Spotify if I were you, cos I'd put it definitely into my playlist.
My tips on getting better - just continue doing more tunes, work on them until you like them, think of what you've learned so far and you'll be good2go
I love the melody and the mood! This is pretty darn good :D
You are right, it's considerably quiet, but that's alright
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