Well, simply put, you remind me of my younger self when it comes to having so many different ideas or themes in one track. You dont have a problem with melodies or ideas obviously, but something that I have learned over the years is that when you stick to just 1 or 2 ideas (usually 2) in a track and build off of those, then it could greatly improve the track becoming a memorable one and have more impact. Take care! keep it up
by the way I just uploaded a new Prog Trance track, check it out if you want!