I'm not really sure about this. I guess the main tones that were almost constant throughout the track make it boring. Changing them from time to time can be a good idea. But it's just an opinion of someone totally lacking of any music-making knowledge, so whatever.
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This was a piece I kept coming back to over and over for like half a year until I finally finished it.
GreyHooves responds:
Thanks for the feedback. Don't be afraid to offer critiques just because you lack music making knowledge, it's not like only the only people who can listen to music are the ones who make it :P
I know a lot of my tracks need improvement, so it's good to hear in what ways people like or dislike my music. That way, when I come back to these older tracks in the future, I will know what areas to focus on
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- 3 min 31 sec
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