nice

I thought you were in the NGUAC, but you're not in the list :P

0:00
start seems a bit to static

0:15
mixing with the kicks is a bit off after that feels like theres a side chain and sound is dipping for the bass

1:00 bass comes in real nice here.

1:30 the sounds are fighting each other pretty bad here

1:48 sounds are blending together

2:20 i hear the makes of a good work up but once agen the sounds are overlapping pretty bad and its hard to make out

2:29 i wish the sounds stood out better here since this is the climax of the song.

2:30 wish the melody was different then the intro, or at least different lead

3:14 low quality sounds destroy the effect here

3:30 wish lead was compressed some and made wider .

4:16 songs a tad long :p

hope this review dose not seem to harsh overall its pretty good , seems like once you get a better understanding of mastering would be alot better but that takes time :3 grate work

not bad