Sorry about the slow response. This is a catchy piece. I think you needed a smoother transition at :22, and also the bass is too loud there. You're good at creating textures, but I think you could still use some more fill and melodic content. The kick at :30 or so really need to be compressed - they're fighting to get through the mix a bit. I'd also encourage you to make sure to equalize out the low frequencies in every instrument except for the bass and kick. Looking into advanced mixing techniques like sidechaining might also help you here, especially since the bass is so prominent in this piece. This piece is well-structured, but I think you could use some variation on the riff at 3:06 towards the end. The fade-out ending also struck me as lazy. Overall, pretty cool track. I think my main concern is the minimalism that characterizes most of the piece. I'd consider adding some pads or harmonies for flavor. Keep at it, DjRemedy. ;)