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TPM - Away (Original Mix)

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Yea. i started this some days earlier. this is quite my masterpiece.
On the second drop, there is little bit "dubstep" (made by some soundeffects)
And the intro and outro drums inspired by Archie.

Please you guys enjoy! And I want to try some others genres too.
BUT! 4 now, enjoy!

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I like the pulsing synths and drums at the beginning. The piece is a little slow to progress, but the mix is pretty clean. There are quite a few moments of minimalism, and I would’ve liked to hear some melodic content in the piece. The drum part could also have been more creative. By around the 3-minute mark, the piece is really repetitive. I appreciated the part at 2:48 for its structural relief, but I was a little thrown off by the filtering at 2:55. Overall, I really didn’t think the piece needed to be this long, either. The drop at 3:35 came on a bit suddenly, even though the pacing of the piece otherwise is very slow. A lot of your instruments also sound pretty generic. In the future, I’d strongly suggest structuring your piece around melodic content or at least a clearer emotional height. The near-uniform energy and repetition of the piece is a serious problem IMO. Don’t be discouraged, though. You have a good sense of harmony and flow. You just need to put a little more effort into the composition. Keep at it, TardisPeanutMusic. :)

5.5/10

Astedroid responds:

Okay. I have to learn more things on the music. But thanks.

Credits & Info

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Listens
430
Downloads
7
Votes
5
Score
2.34 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 17, 2017
11:09 AM EDT
Genre
Dance
File Info
Song
8.8 MB
6 min 27 sec

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