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NGADM Audition 2017-19

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NGADM 2017 Submission

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I like the pensive mood at the beginning and the vocal sample at :12. The progression is a little slow-paced, but the instruments blend well together and build up a lot of tension. After around the 2-minute mark, I was really itching for some more melodic content, though. The piece also badly needs more structural variety at this point. It lost its sense of direction after a while. Stripping away some of the more atmospheric elements at 2:53 wasn’t enough IMO. I also thought the fade-out ending was rather lazy. There’s a lot I like about this piece - the mood and instruments, the production quality, the sound design - but unfortunately the repetition and lack of melodic content really bumped this down a few notches for me. I have to say, though - I laughed out loud when I saw the title. ;) Keep at it, man!

7/10

I like what you have man but i think you should work on your instruments. the triangle is killing it man (not in a good way). if you fix the percussion, drums and take out that triangle it'll be a hell of a lot better. 4/ 5. 3.5 / 5.

Frost.

Dope, love the melody!

The mixing in this is very, very nice and there are some interesting elements to the sound design of this piece! A lot of different, and well thought out layers in this. Sometimes it can get a little repetitive. I think it would be neat if you collaborated with a rapper and maybe even a vocalist as well to make full use of this track, because this would be a solid rap beat. Very nice!

its ok

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4.07 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 15, 2017
1:30 PM EDT
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5.7 MB
4 min 11 sec

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