I see lots of potential. Your voice needs work, and the instruments seem a bit too repetitive and predictable. You can't get better without trial and error though!
Lyrics:
a look in your eyes what do i see,
filled with hatred filled with greed.
an own opinion is too much to ask,
if only you'd remove your mask.
(2x)
fake it,
use it,
make it,
new
fake it,
use it,
make it,
new
save a piece of yourself,
all you are left with is your shell.
the world is bigger when you see,
that nobody cares what you believe.
(2x)
fake it,
use it,
make it,
new
fake it,
use it,
make it,
new
I see lots of potential. Your voice needs work, and the instruments seem a bit too repetitive and predictable. You can't get better without trial and error though!
thanks for the feedback :)
This is amazing!
thank you!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.