I like it.
I didn't know you even upload audio, but I was checking the status of one of my pieces, and this was related somehow.
Anyway...
The first thing I want to point out is that the percussion is pretty cool. Relative volume levels seem on point, except that aside from the kick drums, the low end feels empty. Also, the volume level as a whole is pretty low. I turned my volume all the way up in order to listen to this at a comfortable volume. I understand that recording live instruments can make it difficult to get a good volume level when the mic also captures room reverb. If this is the issue, put a cloth or something soft over the microphone to cut it down.