I like the dreamy beginning. The piece is a little slow to develop, though. The texture doesn’t change significantly until around 1:30. The drums (especially the snare) seemed a bit weak. I like the frantic synths underlying the melody at 2:15. The piece is very flowing, yet is a little hard to follow structurally because of the continuous wave of sound. Unfortunately, this makes it sound more like background music than a stand-alone piece. Still, I think you won me over with the mood and instruments. It’s a pretty piece. Keep at it, man!