Great Start.

I like the progressions. They're well developed. I'm not sure exactly how long you've been making music, but I'm quite sure it's shorter than I have, so you're already better than I am in that respect ^_^.

Anyways, I agree with everyone about the progressions being commercial. Great to start with, but experiment! Tweak! Re-do stuff! It's fun.

One thing I would like to point out, and perhaps this is just me and my defective ears, but sometimes I had a hard time distinquishing the sounds... like they ran together. If you look back and decide you hear the same, a little mastering would take that problem away.

I'm looking forward to seeing how you progress as an artist. Good luck.

Nice dude, im liking this.

Very commericalish, :P

Sounds good so far, that arp's nice.

nice bassline, ;)

I like how the arp progresses, :D

So far so good...

hm your synth that comes in in the climax, the quiet triangle-ish one, its too loud or something cuz when it filters in i can hear the res hurt my ears a bit, :P

nice tho, keep it up, and throw in some more variation, but great start!

check out my stuff if you ahve the time, :P

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Great trance mate, can't say much more than that :)

"Dance Floor"

Nice beginning. I liked the trance arp... it just gave you that trance feel, eh? Beautifully executed :)

The kick and the bassline after that just gave me the "Oh man this is quite the fuckin' trance song". Made me bob my head, thats for sure.

The only thing in this entire beautiful trance track that I had problems with is the snare roll sample that you used. Its an 808 snare sample, and its short and tinny... try using a 909 snare sample instead. Its longer, lower, less tinny, and it gives much better of a trance feel.

Great work! I was expecting a bit more of a progression though, maybe you could work on an awesome melody for your next trance song :) 10'd, and 5'd! Keep this up!

Could you check out and possibly review me and my friends song called "Vampires Dream"? We'd like it a lot if you did :)

Heres a link: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1850716&sub=725
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See ya later!

Nice one.

Good job with this track. You had some food sounding melodies, and it all pieced together well. IT was pretty predictable at most parts. I mean, it's a good song, but it brings nothing new to this genre, you know what I'm saying?

I can see this being played on a dance floor though. It could use a few more drum and bass sections to make it rush through your body more. Also play with some of the dynamics for more depth.

Over all, nice track, though.