Interesting

What an interesting melody. I felt it was really something interesting, then you have these random spurts of notes. I felt they kind of ruined the song, the song's flow and overall feel was jeapordized by those spurts of notes.

The song's core holds potential, I really liked where it was heading.

In any case it does loop rather exceptionally, so bonus points for that!

I'd like to invite you to check out some of my work sometime DyingFuzi! Keep up the good fight!