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Nasal Obstruction

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this was made thanx to cannibal corpse and a wikipedia article about nasal obstruction(..stuffy nose problems) that inspired me to make a song about someone with nasal obstruction obviously going insane, pissed off and..therefor OBVIOUSLY also stabbing himself! thats cannibal corpse logic =D..

my hand is still fucked up..so i made this in midi on the computer..
but lol at least i got to do the vocals XD

p.s here are the lyrics:

Nasal Obstruction..
blockage of inflamed vessels of blood
my nose is shut, can't smell,
can't breath!

dying, slowly

out of breath
nothing seems
to help, except
destruction of my nose..

frustrated i take a kitchen knife from the table
start carving off my nose, my flesh
green fluids flood my face as my blood too erupts
..destruction of my being

Nasal Obstruction..
blockage of inflamed vessels of blood
nose is shut, can't smell,
can't breath!

frustrated i keep hacking at my head
tearing away, mentally deranged
removed my nose, horrific is left
my mutilated face!

nasal..
nasal..
NASAL OBSTRUCTION!

if you like this(or don't) check my instrumental |
http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/138610
i mean, everyone seem to come here while that song is newer and better, i don't get it..

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It's actually pretty good!

Your screaming is pretty good, considering how bad most people are, for that alone I'll give you 4 stars. The songwriting is wonderful. Very good death metal guitar parts, and awesome drums (although its not hard to make double-bass rhythms and blast beats with midi drums), but I'm impressed. 3 more stars. 2 more star for the hilarious lyrics.
Then there's the one thing that drags your score down, and it's pretty obvious. You need a better guitar synth. It doesn't sound ear-bleedingly horrible most of the time, but it really ruins the song. I take off 2 stars.
Overall its good, now get a band and play it on real instruments.

DyingFuzi responds:

thanx man! it will be recorded. awesome review!

Damn, Dethklok!

No shit! this reminds me a lot of Nathan Explosion's vocals!

The short pause at the start sounded SO unwanted! accident?
it needs some improvement on the melody,
and try not to harm your voice like that! unless THIS does not harm it!
Do you folks like COFFEE?

HAHA

Sounded a little wierd at some parts, but you could be METALOCOLYPSE!!!

DyingFuzi responds:

haha thanx a lot dude!

fucked!

this thing is a load of shit it sounds like my grandma puking! next time dont puke on every insturment in town

DyingFuzi responds:

I hope your grandma gets better.

hmmm

dude, that fucking sucks

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DyingFuzi
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Uploaded
Apr 10, 2008
12:20 PM EDT
Genre
Heavy Metal
File Info
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2.7 MB
1 min 57 sec

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