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Well this was something different and you seem to make some good strides with this one and has some nice flavour about its unique and different in its own way so nice tune here i like it

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Ha...

This sounds more blues-ish. I enjoy pineapples.

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Great!

Nice, mild and ambient rythem. I don't get what it has to do with pineapples, but I let my imagination runwild so without any further explenation it all makes sense now. :P Keep up the good work!

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digging the vibes; needs tighter timing and polish

I really liked the mellow vibes that the tempo and the scales you used provided.

Around 20-30s into the track and also at around 1:30-1:50, you kinda seemed to lose the timing a bit. Not terribly, but enough to make it seem a bit sloppy.

The whole thing could have maybe benefitted from some better planning - maybe punctuating the song with a few quick scale thingies, like you did at around 2:05.

It was fun to listen to, but would need a bit more polish and solid structure before I could really say it was good.