This is pretty nice and definitely reminds me of a turtle. Great work dude!

My Pet Turtle

I agree with SBB about the melodies but other than that, good job
and be sure to re-do it too so you can work on your missed notes

Good Job though
I'll give it a 7

Turtles!

I like turtles! I liked this song, but not a lot, though.
You had a good guitar, but it`s really empty and sounds like a preset. So it may sound really empty, this track.
Also, you messed up the melody with the two totally mis-plased melodies of the two different guitars.

But I don`t know... if you placed the different tracks and have a drum beat going so that you know where to place them, and also start over again, and play them over and over so you get it right.

You should record the song in small parts and place them as good as you can in a blank song document after playing all parts perfect.

But nice try, if you redid it and made them all right, and improve the technique, (Also maybe find the melody fitting better) then this track could have been great.

Nice work man!

Nice piece you have hear, I like the 2 layers that I can hear in this, there are a couple of off notes in this however, nothing too severe, just the odd one here and there, a nice peaceful track and I can see effort has been put into this too

Good work!

Peace Out!

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Not bad

Ya deserve a review, The editing/timing was great, till about halfway therough when you hit that 3rd layer of editing, and then things got convoluted, and off beat. Still, good work, worth listening to, and definately worth a re-visit to pick up some proper edits in that mid-section to make it all work out.