I can hear your improvement a ton in this, it sounds like you put effort into the melodies, and the percussion. You also made your samples/synths sound much less sharp than before. Although, it sounds like you're using mainly the same sample/synth for pretty much all of the melodies. Maybe look for a free piano sample? There's a lot of good ones out there that you don't need to pay for. :)
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Okay, so I decided to try an original, and it actually worked out rather well. I tried to start out really chill, but then I went into a little bit of a switch. I think the result is rather interesting, to be honest. I tried to make the chill and the upbeat parts blend naturally, but that's rather hard to do no matter who's doing it.
Regardless, since I actually put SOME effort into this, it's much better than Closer, and, frankly, I want people to look at this song when they want to determine where I'm at in my development of music. It may not be my best, but this is the pinnacle of my etiquette as far as I'm concerned.
Pretty good man, I can hear your improvement. A lot of your percussion is in sync now however its still quite repetitive. Keep it up! :D
I didn't know you made music :0 Pretty good, I like the peaceful intro, and the sudden transition into the alternate melody. It's quite repetitive, but not until the song becomes boring to listen to. Keep it up :)
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