I can hear your improvement a ton in this, it sounds like you put effort into the melodies, and the percussion. You also made your samples/synths sound much less sharp than before. Although, it sounds like you're using mainly the same sample/synth for pretty much all of the melodies. Maybe look for a free piano sample? There's a lot of good ones out there that you don't need to pay for. :)
Pretty good man, I can hear your improvement. A lot of your percussion is in sync now however its still quite repetitive. Keep it up! :D
I didn't know you made music :0 Pretty good, I like the peaceful intro, and the sudden transition into the alternate melody. It's quite repetitive, but not until the song becomes boring to listen to. Keep it up :)
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