Really like the intro. It might be a bit long for some but it's just right imo. Very cool transition into the drop, although if it were me I would leave a bit of silence just to create some contrast and make it hit harder.
The drop itself is pretty cool, but I feel like the plucks that come in are a bit out of place (there does need to be something to guide the drop's melodic change, but I think the plucks are not the instrument of choice here).
Also personally not much of a fan of 2:55, but I do see a need for a change at that point.
Really promising piece you have here, keep it up, hope you manage to finish this.