I am gonna review the songs technical bits, as sounds and effects.
The sounds are really basic. If I am not mistaken I can hear 3xosc vsti in there?
The sounds could really use some more depth and chorus because otherwise it gets kinda boring to listen to.
I would love to hear some more punch in the kick, some fills and crashes.
There is no buildup or such.
There is alot of ways of learning fl studio, I have used it several years now, on and off, and a great help to me has been watching other musicians show how they work.
Look up vayhoz on YouTube. He has great "how to" videos that you can learn tons of ways to improve your sound.
Keep it up!