I already dont like the way it starts because the synth .....i dont like it. Your other track is much better, but this is....kind of all over the place and could use more layers with synths and better quality synths overall. Sorry....i don't know what else to say about this really. I like the kick though. But everything else...can't say i do. The mixing is alright but....there's not much here in this song. Your other piece is really good though.