I like it. Maybe it could have had a bit more variety and bass.
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I like the idea you're going for, but I would mix the background noise a bit more. I feel that the composition isn't going exactly well with the other parts of the song. But other than that, me gusta.
eh. nice beat. sounds like something from like matrix.
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