i like it. im no ambient expert, but i realy like all the plucks and strings you use. i especially love the flute thats introduced towards the end. i also like the crescendo that goes on for the whole track. theres only two things that could be fixed.
1. a tiny bit less low end (bass)
2. looping would be nice
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.