I am enjoying the overall composition, but the recording quality leaves a lot to be desired. You've got it compressed to the point where it sounds like it's all underwater. And while I am 100% in favour of live-recording, you will find that you benefit greatly from a more high-quality microphone and a dedicated recording space. At the bare minimum, you should have a padded backdrop for your mic to filter out ambient sounds.

But like I said, the composition itself was highly enjoyable. You sing and play well, and it was a great mood.