This is really good, and there are little things you probably will need to improve on but this is good for a second song. Keep it up!
Well, this is the second song that I've written. I tried to stay completely original. I've improved a bit from my first piece. I made the drums louder for everyone who said they were too quiet in my last piece. I know this sounds kinda clusterf**k. My next ones will be better.
This is really good, and there are little things you probably will need to improve on but this is good for a second song. Keep it up!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.