Alright, I'm going to try to work my way through this flood of music.
I like the song, but it takes forever to get going, almost 1 minute until any real main melody kicks in.
The instrument at 1:22 completely overpowers the other instrument and is slightly grating. You should have turned down the volume a bit. The instrument is used much better at 1:36.
I love that you used basslines (or at least it sounded like it). It wasn't noticeable, which isn't necessarily bad, and it made the song feel much more "whole" in a way.
2:41 Why. Just why. No please. Don't do this again with that instrument. It's just so loud and grating that- BWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
-QJrocks