Wow, you've really come a long way since the last composition I heard from you!
The one thing I'd say is that the drumset doesn't have any dynamics (as in, every beat is at the same velocity). I'm not sure what you used to play it, but I would fiddle with how loud some beats are compared to others, it makes it sound less computer-generated.
But seriously, awesome guitar work!
I dont like the rock musics,but still good music !xd
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.