Its Ok, but a little repetitive, which is why i dont like djvi
Not sure about the arrangement on this. Doesn't feel well thought out. The drop, you needed to have high passed the kick before it for the bass to actually hit.
The volumes of the instruments is a bit all over the place too. Maybe try out sidechaining some of the synths so that your drums can pop through the mix?
You can use a free tool called SPAN to check the frequency spectrum of your track, which I highly recommend. You'd be able to visually see that your track is lacking bass.
Good attempt, keep it up.
Thanks for the quick response! I'll look into SPAN right away, so thanks for the recommendation!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.