Not bad not bad. You did some nice trasitions and everything synced up real good, I can easily see this on a video game background music. Very ambient and kind of has a creepy vibe to it. Could maybe use some more changes in it? At first it didnt seem to loop correctly when it fades out at the end but after listening to it again it makes better sense. Just a little opinional thought the bass is a little to high on the synth bass and the snare pops a little too hard, just a simple EQing issue. Overall a good track, hope to hear it in a game a some point.
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