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Crash Landing

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I basically used just the title of the very first song I ever wrote under the name Zip Zipper to make a totally new song out of it, exemplifying my instinctual thoughts on moving from coast-to-coast without any experience or resources!! Help!!!!

Lyrics:

My subtle mistakes,
All add to the new perspective,
Without any brakes,
And towards the reborn objective.

Oh, I’ve got cold feet…
I don’t wanna do this anymore!
Should I take my seat,
Hoping that this love will soar?

I mean, who’s gonna still be standing,
If we arrive crash landing?
So, would you still be okay,
If I don’t show up anyway?

To be humble is great,
For the better of interaction.
It’s never too late;
Flying forwards to satisfaction.

Oh, what time is it?
I might miss my next connection.
My restless legs won’t sit,
When I’m feeling imperfection.

So, I’ll be in the aisle standing,
While we dive crash landing!
Hold on, how can this be ending,
Now that I’m not pretending?

Gliding far, far on my wings,
To the unknown.
So, it’s hard to process these things,
Behind a cell phone.

Oh, who’s malicious and,
Who is stern?
Time will tell me what services,
I should learn…

But, of course, I can’t stop;
Toasting all to going out there!
Even if the plane does drop,
I can say I did my dare.

Don’t worry now,
We’re going down crash landing!

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I like the ambitiousness of this tune, and I like the direction you are going for with it. On the other hand, I think this song falls flat in a few ways; mainly in terms of the flatness of the arrangement and the lack of any percussion.
Another thing that I noticed about this song is the (over)abundance of lyrics, I have a sense of what the song is about, but I think the lyrics could be improved if they were less redundant and told more of a story.
All in all, I think this song has lots of potential, but it could be more engaging and concise.

ZipZipper responds:

*clasps silver necklace to chest*

omg. I don't know what to say other than this...

ZipZipper responds:

*watches*

magic...

ZipZipper responds:

is what wizards do!

Credits & Info

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Faves:
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Downloads
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Score
3.93 / 5.00

Uploaded
Sep 13, 2015
1:19 PM EDT
Genre
Techno
File Info
Song
5.5 MB
3 min 26 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.