Very good. :) Make some more my friend ;)

nice one, make it longer!

You have a drum line and a rhythm guitar. These are the first steps in achieving something far better. You need a melody to go with this as well as a base line if you can manage. Take pride that this small idea isn't complete junk. If you take a look at my music some of it is complete junk, but there are some gems in there to be proud of even if it's not a platinum song. Keep up the good work!

Instrumentation doesn't right to me. The feel disingenuous and very plane. Composition wise, there is almost no development of this idea at all. Even small ideas can be expanded and developed into something far greater. This did none of that. Keep creating! I'm sure you've got plenty of musical growth in you!