Hey! Thought I should quickly review this before work. :)

The Good:
-Excellent rhythms at the start.
-Fantastic pad at around 0:23 coming in. It's quite beautiful, and works just fine with the low-fi piano in the background. I'm actually surprised the piano sounds good, because it sounds like FL Keys or something - but then, you've always been good at taking lower quality instruments and making them build a ton.
-Great rhythms and patterns at around 0:47.

The Not-So-Good:
-Some of your percussive hits stick out like very sore thumbs. I'm looking at you, 0:16, 0:39, 0:54, 0:58, 1:04, 1:10, etc. Those are definitely a bit too loud and too raw to fit into the rest of the piece.
-Mixing gets fuzzy around 0:30 where the piano is buried. Same around 1:05 where the drums are loud.
-Plain delay fadeout ending. I thought this was going into a reverb wash, which would have sounded a bit better.

Overall: I like it. And I'm glad to hear you making more music! <3 I've sent an email as well, so I'll definitely talk to you more!