I like your voice, but it's sometimes hard to hear due to the background music. It might just be my headphones, but I would recommend better balancing between the voice and music.

I do like how you use the music and sound effects to match the text.

Keep it up.

man you really have a soothing voice! You're gonna be a great addition to the audio portal. ;) I don't really like to listen to people talk that much, but your read-throughs are very relaxing!

Nice