I vaguely recall listening to this when you uploaded the original, and I have to say that I think the slower tempo fits this piece better. It really retains that dreamy quality, although I think it still could've progressed faster and it needs a fuller texture. It's not really a structurally complete piece, but I don't think that's what you were going for anyway. Cool synths and harmonies! Keep at it, man. ;)

At first I was like: "Sounds like one of my older songs"
But then I noticed that I tried remixing this track a year ago..
Still like the melody!

Hey! This sounds pretty cool dude :)
It could progress a bit more though.

Good job ;)