As an instrumental to keep entertaining someone it needs to have some lead instrument drawing focus where vocals would be or else non musicians get bored fast. If this had lyrics or like a Steve Vai-esque lead over top of the middle sections it'd be dope as shit.
Thank you, and I definitely agree. I have all the intent to eventually have vocals on this track. I am however not a good vocalist. I am currently writing lyrics in hopes to stumble across someone with some talent. I guess I could write some leads for those parts too, but really, I'm not a phenomenal guitarist and would rather not ruin it. I just cannot execute my idea of great leads unfortunately.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.