(Sorry for the constant comments, by the way...It'll end, trust me) With your songs I can tell that you actually put something into them, feeling, bits of yourself, and I can't hear that in A LOT of other songs by other artists. I think it's something that is definitely undervalued in today's culture, especially since, well, feelings are fleeting and pretty hard to capture. Not to mention some of them are pretty painful not just to yourself but anyone else who hears them...but it's a different kind of pain, if you catch my meaning.
anyway keep it up, I love your work!

What software are you using, because it doesn't sound like a very good one (No offense)

The piano sounds short, you should have it sustained, and the drums are really sucky, if you are using presets... don't. i made that mistake, they are obvious and sound terrible, especially for a sad song :(

Over-all this could use a lot of work, but that may not be possible if you are not using a good software like FL studio or garage band, ect.

This reminded me or a DragonBall Z-esque powering up scene after all of the main character's friends have been killed lol