It's nice to hear something different from you. Knowing your work I think you could have done something a bit more epic.
Your mix has gotten a lot better and your choice of instruments for the most part was excelent. The drags on the snare sound bad and you should have humanized them to get a more natural sound with your samples. The timpani sounds badass though.
You got the feel for adventure right and I liked the little choir detail at around 3 minutes.
Keep at it.