I love the sound that the kick + ride and bells create together at 00:30. However, just before it starts your sidechained plucky chord sound seems to cut off awkwardly. Really nice transition to the main melody. The "acid" lead sound is too agressive to my taste though, especially in this kind of song.

Like sharkpotato said, the vocal sample could use some variation in pitch. It would make it quite interesting. I liked the scratchy effect at 03:13, got a bit surprised there but it sounded really good. The ending disappointed me a bit with the sudden ending.

Overall every sound fit in the mix and mastering seemed pretty good. I especially enjoyed the atmosphere of the whole song.

Really dig the intro. I'm not all that great when it comes to creating sliced vocals but I felt I was waiting for the vocals to go somewhere. If that's all that's there for the same then there isn't much you can do but make pitch them up or down and octave every once and a while or make a little "phrase" with another sample. I really like the atmosphere you create with the track.

I'm a beginner so take that with a grain of salt and just keep doing what feels true to you. I do like the track. That's just a suggestion.

If you have the time I just finished my second track so I know there's a lot of room for improvement and I could use feedback from other that have been at this for a lot longer that I have.

Here's a link: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/637745