Im certainly starting to see some improvement in your songs :) This song has a very good solid structure to it.

The main problem is that a lot of the sounds you use are just a bit random and don't really act like a melody. they just make the song sound awkward. Id try to make a melody rather than just layer bass over bass (some basses just don't work with the song all together :S).
also I dont like how instruments are introduced so suddenly into the song. Id try to make it more progressive, try experimenting with automation clips more ;)

Overall though this isnt bad! You're certainly making an improvement :D

I hope this review helped ;P

Nice job Etzer you're getting better and better just at 00:30-00:60 the bass was a bit too loud was overpowering the melody overall awesome job , and I found what song im going to use for my first 2.0 level. :D

I like the choice of synths on this one. Next time, try not to make the bass overpower the instruments. Great song overall. =)

i actually like this very much :)
you're getting a lot better!
i can teach you some tricks if you want (just pm me on newgrounds)
:)