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Author Comments

I think this is my best work yet. I personally like it but I have honestly no idea what others will think of it! Please give me honest feedback. Even if you think its awful, I'd love to know why!

If you are wondering, Sylenth1 is where I got all the instruments, which may explain the difference in sound quality xD


Im certainly starting to see some improvement in your songs :) This song has a very good solid structure to it.

The main problem is that a lot of the sounds you use are just a bit random and don't really act like a melody. they just make the song sound awkward. Id try to make a melody rather than just layer bass over bass (some basses just don't work with the song all together :S).
also I dont like how instruments are introduced so suddenly into the song. Id try to make it more progressive, try experimenting with automation clips more ;)

Overall though this isnt bad! You're certainly making an improvement :D

I hope this review helped ;P

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Nice job Etzer you're getting better and better just at 00:30-00:60 the bass was a bit too loud was overpowering the melody overall awesome job , and I found what song im going to use for my first 2.0 level. :D

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I like the choice of synths on this one. Next time, try not to make the bass overpower the instruments. Great song overall. =)

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i actually like this very much :)
you're getting a lot better!
i can teach you some tricks if you want (just pm me on newgrounds)

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Credits & Info


4.27 / 5.00

Aug 2, 2015
9:21 PM EDT
File Info
2.6 MB
2 min 19 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.