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Eclipse Of Destiny

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Here's another song from my Frenetic Album ! Go check it out !

Album: https://berserkyd.bandcamp.com/
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You remind me of dragon force!

BERSERKYD responds:

Cool !! But not as fast as Herman the legend Li !

I like the edgy guitar sound you were going for here, but the piece seems to lack an appropriate intro, instead throwing you into the midst of some energetic riff. I also think the drums are just a little too quiet. The drums helped channel the energy of this track, but as it is now it just sounds like a continuous stream of high-energy content with little dynamic contrast. If you have a structural design to your piece that ebbs and flows a little more, it could really help keep the listener grounded and enhance the emotional/dramatic qualities of the piece (as they may apply, in this case, more so for drama). As the piece is now, it can be kind of hard to discern the structural components of the piece. I loved a lot of the individual riffs, though, and the distorted pulsing effect you had at around 3:05 was really cool. The ending felt conclusive enough, although I think the track is quite unnecessarily long. I generally think it's a good idea to keep the listener engaged using dynamic contrast, as well as by introducing new instruments at transitory moments in the piece. You did neither here. I admire your sense of harmony and the punchy, crisp vibe this has, but for me it's a little hard to latch onto given the structural flatness. Hope this helped, and keep up the good work. ;)

7/10

If it is okay with you, may I use this in a future video? It is that good man. I mean it. Awesome job and keep up the awesome. :)

- V

This deserves some compensation. My ears are in your debt!

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Uploaded
Jul 31, 2015
8:35 AM EDT
Genre
Punk
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11.4 MB
5 min 29 sec
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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.