I like this one the best out of the 3 so far! It has really nice variation and a good vibe to it. The melody is great (you seem to be pretty good at melodies), and it has very good balance to it. The ending was a bit abrupt, but I myself suck at endings too.
In a some sort of response to DaRealWollen down there. I think whats lacking is a bit of depth (though I could be wrong). Reverb is one way to do it, or you can use an EQ plugin to up the bass. But I would say not to worry about that right now...just focusing on getting composition down is cool.
You're doing great man! Sorry I didn't get to this sooner. Keep it up :3
Thank you so much Jonadrew!!! I'm glad you like the variation and balance, those are definitely things I look for when I make my music! I'll be sure to work on the endings. ;) Don't worry about being late, I appreciate reviews in general! I'm uploading my fourth song later today, so be sure to check that one out too :D
This is a xolid 4 my friend :D . What do you use?
Anyway the vibe is good and the beat is awesome...
It's just the feel that it's lacking... Maybe a little bit of reverb here and there. :)
Thank you so much for the feedback and rating! :D I actually use Garageband, and there's no reverb tool :p The best I can do is copy and paste the note many times back to back and change the emphasis for each one. I'd get FL Studio but I don't make music that often... full EP releases like this one are quite rare for me xD