this is decent- OH MY GOD THE DRUMS ARE KILLING MY EARS. Seriously, turn the drums down on at least that one part.

Although this is the wrong genre, i love the rocky feeling of this song. The chords sound awesome and I like the fact that your making what you want to make. half a star off wrong genre but this is my cup of tea. It would more of go into the electronic rock genre but overall Im love it!

Firstly, it's in the wrong genre. This sounds more like rock than it does Electronic/Ambient.

Now, on to the song itself. The chord work is decent, if not quite repetitive. Sections like 1:22 sound like they're peaking, like everything's bursting through the speakers, and I don't know if it's got to do with samples, or mixing.

1:48 became slow, and I honestly don't know what to make of this fast-slow-fast-slow change. 2:28 sounds..... eeeeehhh, a bit bland to me. And then the drums at 2:40 start peaking again, like seriously, there's distortion. And it continues.

I don't know what relation to Cicero this piece has, but this piece overall sounds eeehhh to me.