I love that you mention that it's a work in progress, because now I know you know what's wrong with it. I certainly would love to hear more out of the piano melody, and make it less harsh of a transitioned sound. I just love to add ambient to my stuff. 4.5 stars for having something nice to listen to.
I just made this today, so I'm sure going back to it with some fresh ears after a day or two away from it will do a lot of good. Thanks for the kind words and critique : )