Very nice sounds, but the build up is quite slow. The conventions of DnB are fast tempo, 150 and above, and breaks. Look up the "Amen Break", and you will see what I'm talking about. The bass you have here is certainly nice to listen to, as are the atmospheric synths. I just don't feel as if it's complete, for the DnB genre. For DnB, this would simply be a very long intro. Other than that, amazing sounds. Just needs a bit more oomph. Try out some breaks, slice them up, and drop them on top, if you wanna see what I mean.

Thanks for the request!