Hello YukkiHonoka.
I won't rate or vote this time, (so this isn't really a zero) but I would like to give you my impressions on your track. I think you have an interesting voice and style, but this piece isn't the best for it. When you sing in the lower notes, it sounds well pitched and secure, but in the high notes, the pitch goes off and sounds a little forced. I would like to hear you singing in a piece adequate for your range to really know what you are capable of. I like this song, but I know it isn't an easy one.
I hope this review was constructive and helpful for you. See you around.