This has a very strong Alan Wake vibe about it. And that, to me, is, emotionally, an extremely grand compliment. Alan Wake was one of the most moving games I've ever played, and half of that was due to the music. And you have managed to create something on the same caliber with this piece.
Unbelievable.

I don't think this is dragged out at all, it's perfect to me!
Nice long intro, building up a lot of pressure while it goes. And then there is the percussion coming in and completely dominating the field. The quality of this is amazing, it sounds like it's being played by a real orchestra! Kudos to you, I hope you keep it up! 5/5-dl-fvrt :)

It was kind of meh.

I liked the feeling it gave me in the beginning, all the chords are pleasent, but it dragged on for far too long.
The melody is fine, it could be better but it's main problem is that it kicks in too late.
The part from 1:40 was good too, but like most of this it dragged on for too long.
All around it's fine, but I think it would have been better if it was shorter, because then It wouldn't have given me time to get bored by any of the parts.