Nice! I feel the opening melodies kinda clash with each other in some ways all going at the same time. I feel it could use a stronger opening. The main synth during the guitars should be turned down some. This one is more metal than your last track. Also better mixed. But the mixing needs some work, some levels need adjustment. The drums sound fine, but maybe turn up the snare some. It feels like the mix is being drowned in a sense. Did you use reverb on the guitars? They sound a bit distant, they should sound more upfront in your face.
Overall, for the most part, this is very well written, but needs a better mix and it'll be like super fantastic.
Thanks man! I feel like the contest was pretty strong this year, and I did take your advice an I refreshed the MP3 with a more eq'd version. Mastering is still something I have to work with but I do thank you for the opportunity sir and very much heed your critique. \m/
Okay... this is definitely boss music I could SLAY to.
Thanks for listening friend! Always delighted someone take the time to say so as well! \m/ \m/