It's pretty chaotic, and kind of erie. I suppose that wouldn't be a bad thing if used correctly. It's not horrible, but not good either. I like the melodies you created, not bad for a new guy. But it sounds a little off. Maybe they're off notes or something. I always had trouble figuring out what notes worked with what. If you open up pitcher in the master channel, it'll tell you what notes work on a certain scale. Very useful for me, at least.
Transitioning could use work, but shit, you got a song man. And all you can do is keep creating!!!
Drop me a review if you find the time.