Sounds good man, only thing I would say is that its a bit repetitive and ends a bit abruptly, but think thats down to taste if anything. I do think it sounds pretty epic though.
Thanks! You're right. It could do with some variation, and a longer length. I'm not sure how to make something that doesn't feel disappointing after the end of the song though. An overarching melody or something could probably help too, but the songs already pretty full. Anything more muddies it up. I'll continue trying though!