== This is an NGAUC Audition Round Review. ==

The melodies here seem to be quite random - they jump all over the place and don’t have a particular contour or interest to them. The drums are very aggressive - a little *too* aggressive, I think, for what seems like it wants to be a chilled out piece. I like the piano break a lot - the piano sound is great and it takes down the energy level for some much needed relief. I think without the chaotic drums, this song would be pretty solid. Keep at it! Score: 5

Mini-scores (See http://johnfn.newgrounds.com/news/post/936953 for what this means and how to improve)
* Composition: 2/4
* Arrangement: 3/4
* Mixing: 2/4

Its a little repetitive, but catchy! I think maybe dropping the beat at one point and adding a solo for that beautiful piano you have going on would be a pretty nice addition to this. The song itself though reminds me of a cool chase scene from a video game or movie. So I do think you came across with what you were going for (If that is what you were going for hehe). Keep up the good work!

Wyldfyre1

Oh my god im blushing xD You are very talented indeed. I'm glad I inspired you create an amazing song. Keep up the good work!!! <3<3<3

This sounds very saucy! Which... means awesome!

Its really good, impressed. The start of this song is dope! Great job here