== This is an NGAUC Audition Round Review. ==

The first thing that you should know is that the source material has 2 really interesting chord changes on the final 2 notes of the phrase that you didn't really replicate here, which I kinda wish you did (I like them!). I think the sound choices that you made are kind of grating - a lot of high, harsh frequencies - and that would definitely need to be fixed (low pass please! :-) for this song to really be enjoyable. On the other hand, you did an impressive job at expanding a 10 second loop into 2 minutes. You should really feel free to add your own content to a remix - that's totally valid and it can make the song more interesting. Score: 5

Mini-scores (See http://johnfn.newgrounds.com/news/post/936953 for what this means and how to improve)
* Composition: n/a (As this is a remix, it doesn't make sense for me to score you here.)
* Arrangement: 2/4
* Mixing: 2/4